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The waves crash around us,
The foam is harsh and white,
Splintering wood surround us,
The moon our only light.

As we drift beneath the waves,
I float and wonder, staying brave,
As ice cold water fills my lungs,
I only feel euphoria.

Death acts like an anodyne,
As I breathe in salty brine,
I feel no pain, I feel no fear,
There's no more moonlight, way down here.

As I breathe out, ebullition,
The ship tears itself in two,
A perfect natural demolition,
There's nothing left to do.

I see her sinking next to me,
Her perfect flesh incarnadine,
If there's anything I haven't seen,
It's female beauty more supreme...
Words I chose -
Anodyne
Ebullition
Incarnadine

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Wombat-Pentagram Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
well it got into the top ten according to the journal but so did the one i put in for the contest :)
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Wombat-Pentagram Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
this is cool.. i like it.. i hope you win :)
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Fidecen Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
Thanks, I hope I win too :D
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Zarinah Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
this is really really good...
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Fidecen Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
Why thank you, hopefully the judge thinks the same, cause it'll land me a whole years subscription if I win :D
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