The waves crash around us,
The foam is harsh and white,
Splintering wood surround us,
The moon our only light.
As we drift beneath the waves,
I float and wonder, staying brave,
As ice cold water fills my lungs,
I only feel euphoria.
Death acts like an anodyne,
As I breathe in salty brine,
I feel no pain, I feel no fear,
There's no more moonlight, way down here.
As I breathe out, ebullition,
The ship tears itself in two,
A perfect natural demolition,
There's nothing left to do.
I see her sinking next to me,
Her perfect flesh incarnadine,
If there's anything I haven't seen,
It's female beauty more supreme...
well it got into the top ten according to the journal but so did the one i put in for the contest
this is cool.. i like it.. i hope you win
this is really really good...